A story with excellent potential that I think many publications would be interested in buying, but the pitch needs significant re-working
A ghoulish pitch that tells me to be afraid rather than showing me why I should be
Did someone kidnap all the headlines? A long-winded food pitch doesn’t sell what could be a nice story
The second Pitch Pit victim ignores my advice about headlines and offers too much.
The first Pitch Pit critique takes a swing at flowery language and hyper-positivism.